Feedback [FIRST TRY] PHP BANNER

[Floppybirds]

I created my first proper PHP banner today and i wondered what you guys think?

 

[reishin]

i dont like the font. since its your first 6/10. keep it up

 

[LeChris]

Seems nice for your first try, I wish I could create a PHP banner

 

[Thursday]

It looks really bad, tbh. The font is not habbo-based at all. At least if you're going to move away from Habbo themed graphics make them attractive.
2/10 and the 2 is for effort.

 

[Xylo]

Like I already told you on your advertisement thread, your banner is super plain, so boring to look at, doesn't make me want to join it at all. Try to be more creative.

 

[Swaggots]

Looks good, just need to fix that font.

 

[Jaxes]

For a first try this is decent.. But your banner doesn't really relate to any theme what so ever to do with Habbo which I suggest changing if you decide to use this, Also the description along the banner isn't really appealing to drag any type of audience to your retro. Other than this good attempt and good use of the Coding to create the php banner

 

[JPride]

Not bad for your first try! 7/10

 

[Brought]

This is not what I would consider a great graphics piece. The effort put into this looks minimal to none. I would suggest using a pre-made template or working on the actual template before even working on adding the PHP script.

 

[Floppybirds]

i made a new one! its not exactly php but here lol

 

[Daltron]

i made a new one! its not exactly php but here lol

Yet there again the ont does not look like it would match with habbo and the firefly logo is way to big and is way to dark change the bg or take off some of the siding on the logo use habbofont.com if your making a logo. Don't use the basic photoshop or paint.net font use a custom font or actually make it php?

 

[Jaxes]

i made a new one! its not exactly php but here lol

Starting to slowly make improvements by you taking onboard the feedback which is given to you which is good.. However Possibly try re-sizing your logo and giving it a white outline of 1 I think it is not too sure you'd have to play around.. Another this is possibly try adding a box below to where your text could go (the description of the retro) You could also try making it relate to a certain theme for example christmas. Other than this you're making improvements which is good best of luck!

 

[Floppybirds]

worked on the banner a little bit (the white box is where users online goes)

 

[Brought]

Looks like the same shit to me.

 

[Daltron]

Here i took upon myself to help out a young fellow that doesn't know how to make a banner

 

[Floppybirds]

Thanks! i tried to post a new banner but it keeps showing the old one, lets hope this works
the white box is for the users online thing

 

[Daltron]

okay well ur logo is hideous you have a normal text under the logo and you have a downloaded background
so mate just go use my banner i just made no offense if you just try a little harder it could look nice

 

[caution3]

Thats Actually Very Good! It Even Tells You Whos Online! 8/10
 

okay well ur logo is hideous you have a normal text under the logo and you have a downloaded background
so mate just go use my banner i just made no offense if you just try a little harder it could look nice

Woah. Thats Deep. Normal Font Can Still Look Good Ya Know. Something Tells Me You Like It But you want
to make yourself cool by pitying on peoples creations.
(Shame On You)

 

[Daltron]

Thats Actually Very Good! It Even Tells You Whos Online! 8/10
 
Woah. Thats Deep. Normal Font Can Still Look Good Ya Know.

I owned firefly forever lol but we decided to close but this thread needs to be closed as firefly is closed and the thread is useless @Brad close thread pls

 

[Brought]

I owned firefly forever lol but we decided to close but this thread needs to be closed as firefly is closed and the thread is useless @Brad close thread pls

Firefly wasn't even open for a month steadily lol please stop