Feedback One of the 1st banners I've made

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Cody199

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What do you think about this banner? Any advice is welcome. Thanks in advance!

 

Rastaberry

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Looks pretty nice you can also use the text cloud under the What are you waiting for to: ''... Users online'' If you're good with making dynamic banners. Otherwise I'll be glad to help you out with it!
 

Liam

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I like it although it's hard to believe that's one of your first banners :eek:
Keep up the good work.
 

Cody199

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Looks pretty nice you can also use the text cloud under the What are you waiting for to: ''... Users online'' If you're good with making dynamic banners. Otherwise I'll be glad to help you out with it!
thanks for the offer but it was just for practice,the owner of the hotel is using a banner made by notorious. There is no competing with him :D
 

Rastaberry

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Hotel name: Habbie.

Description: R63 - Stable community - Daily updates - Great catalogue - Hiring - Join today!
 

JayC

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I don't like the chat bubbles on the left side because on the right you have the feeling of welcome and open-ness but you have originality within the images that are used but then on the left it makes it feel cramped and the bubbles just makes it seem weird.. I would probably change the left side to make it feel less crowded but look professional; if I made any sense at all...
 

Evilsmoothie

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I really expected something shit when I clicked the link. But hey, bud. That ain't bad at all!
 

Cody199

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I really expected something shit when I clicked the link. But hey, bud. That ain't bad at all!
Thanks
I don't like the chat bubbles on the left side because on the right you have the feeling of welcome and open-ness but you have originality within the images that are used but then on the left it makes it feel cramped and the bubbles just makes it seem weird.. I would probably change the left side to make it feel less crowded but look professional; if I made any sense at all...
Yeah, I get what your saying,a nd you are completely right. It is too crowded on the right. Thanks for the feedback!
 

Cody199

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Hotel name: Habbie.

Description: R63 - Stable community - Daily updates - Great catalogue - Hiring - Join today!
Do you have a certain theme you want on the right? Also, if you could give me a logo that would be great!
 

Kontrol

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Meh, could add some more features and change it up a bit, but overall nice work! 6/10
 

ano2k77

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This is a good banner for your first attempt :) Maybe put some text at the bottom though if you're going to make a transparent layer :) Preferably Volter
 
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