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[ArchoCrime]

Hey Devbest,
I've been making some banners, not for retros. (not yet)
I want to see if you guys may see if I'm doing good so far on these 2 banners, when I make more banners I will update the thread.

Banner #1

Banner #2

Banner #3 (Rushed)

Banner #4 (Made for Amp Hotel; pending; might update again)

Banner #5 (Made for Amp Hotel; pending; 1st animation banner; not so well; will improve)

 

[ano2k77]

First one is not good. Mainly because the transparent layer at the bottom goes over the banner. However the second one, it's better but not really good.

Tip: Try using a Volter Goldfish font, it'll make it look more habbo related.

 

[ArchoCrime]

Ok, thanks for the feedback.

 

[imrce]

Good start, but I have to totally agree with @ano2k77 and his points.
Keep trying

 

[Miserable]

I personally think the first one is better than the second.
They're both not to good but the second has bulky text, which is pretty yucky.

 

[ArchoCrime]

Good start, but I have to totally agree with @ano2k77 and his points.
Keep trying

I personally think the first one is better than the second.
They're both not to good but the second has bulky text, which is pretty yucky.

Thanks for both of your feedbacks, I appreciate it. I'm going to finish the 3rd banner right now, I'll update the thread in 10 mins.

 

[ArchoCrime]

Updated thread! 8/20/14

 

[ano2k77]

Updated thread! 8/20/14

Tbh, it's improved a little. Use a Volter Goldfish font. Go on

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And search Volter Goldfish. Download it and use it on banners, and make the size of the font either 7 or 9. Which ever looks more right.

 

[ArchoCrime]

Tbh, it's improved a little. Use a Volter Goldfish font. Go on

You must be registered for see links

And search Volter Goldfish. Download it and use it on banners, and make the size of the font either 7 or 9. Which ever looks more right.

Ok, I'll use the font, thanks for the feedback.
I'll make another banner in an hour or so, I have some tasks to do.

 

[imrce]

Once again, agree with @ano2k77.
However, it has improved!!

 

[ArchoCrime]

Once again, agree with @ano2k77.
However, it has improved!!

Thank you again, like I said; I'm going to make another one in a hour or so.

 

[ArchoCrime]

Updated thread! 8/20/2014; 7:53 PM

 

[ArchoCrime]

Updated thread! 8/21/14; 1:09 AM

 

[ArchoCrime]

@ano2k77 Would you help me make a banner that is animated with Photoshop CS6?

 

[ArchoCrime]

Updated thread! 8/21/14; 7:26 PM

 

[Brad]

you're surely getting better, well done!

 

[Jaden]

Hey Devbest,
Banner #5 (Made for Amp Hotel; pending; 1st animation banner; not so well; will improve)

not that good, you should keep the banner on loop forever + the font is unhabboish

 

[RyanzRetros]

I love the third one, other than that the second is plain and the first is nice but needs improvements which others have already said.