Show DevBest Critique My Portfolio Design!

[Kawaii]

Can someone critique this and tell me anything that's bad or needs changing?

(Ignore the orange lines at the sides, they were from Join.ME)

Updated the design.

 

[Snappy]

Pretty nice! 9/10 maybe go easy on the border radius on the nav bar

 

[Kawaii]

Pretty nice! 9/10 maybe go easy on the border radius on the nav bar

I was going for more of a curved design around the nav bar rather than a rectangle with curved edges (if that makes sense(?))

 

[Snappy]

I was going for more of a curved design around the nav bar rather than a rectangle with curved edges (if that makes sense(?))

Well maybe make the border-radius:5px

 

[Kawaii]

Well maybe make the border-radius:5px

Personally I prefer the more rounded look.

 

[Snappy]

Personally I prefer the more rounded look.

That looks better in my opinion

 

[OM3GA]

I love simplicity ~

 

[Sysode]

I'm more a fan of the top design. Information people see on the second design is just your name (first impressions account for a lot mayn) - although on the first design I'd use less text and keep it simple just like your design.

I do like the navigation as you've created it, it just flows well in my opinion. Keep us updated with your progress!
Can't really give much feedback as of now, we have no example code and no other content besides the introduction.

Edit: Moved thread to "showcase" as you're not really asking for any help in particular, feedback is better suited in the showcase section.

 

[Kawaii]

I'm more a fan of the top design. Information people see on the second design is just your name (first impressions account for a lot mayn) - although on the first design I'd use less text and keep it simple just like your design.

I do like the navigation as you've created it, it just flows well in my opinion. Keep us updated with your progress!
Can't really give much feedback as of now, we have no example code and no other content besides the introduction.

Edit: Moved thread to "showcase" as you're not really asking for any help in particular, feedback is better suited in the showcase section.

Personally I thought the top design didn't look simplistic enough - although I do think maybe a possible short sentence or some kind of information should be added. Also, I'm planning on releasing it when it's finished.

 

[Markshall]

I prefer the top one tbh but increase the line height in your paragraph. And ignore these, the navigation you have now is fine. Don't decrease the border radius. Just increase the line height and it'll be good.

 

[Kawaii]

I prefer the top one tbh but increase the line height in your paragraph. And ignore these, the navigation you have now is fine. Don't decrease the border radius. Just increase the line height and it'll be good.

The top design was actually based from your own portfolio

 

[Markshall]

The top design was actually based from your own portfolio

Sorta guessed

I ain't pissed though. The entire design wasn't even mine, I just coded it.

 

[Magic]

I like it a lot, I prefer the top design though.
Clean and simple!

 

[IntactDev]

This is really nice; what is the font used for the logo?