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[NathanCarn3y]

I have taken interest lately into graphics. Please give me feedback on 5 banner designs thanks!

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[JynX]

The text looks awful in all of them.

 

[NathanCarn3y]

The text looks awful in all of them.

This is my really first few tries actually doing banners. Can you elaborate on the text. Like what exactly looks bad about it

Thanks for the feedback btw

 

[JynX]

The font doesn't at all go together with the 'Habbo theme' and on top of that the grey box with opacity behind it looks aids and doesn't flow well together. The color scheme of the background picture is weird and doesn't flow with the logo as it should. Lastly the one with the box is missing the left hand side? Also if I'm honest the use of '//' looks a bit weird. Lastly I'd suggest adding some padding to the right side of it to match the left padding on the logo.

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[NathanCarn3y]

The font doesn't at all go together with the 'Habbo theme' and on top of that the grey box with opacity behind it looks aids and doesn't flow well together. The color scheme of the background picture is weird and doesn't flow with the logo as it should. Lastly the one with the box is missing the left hand side? Also if I'm honest the use of '//' looks a bit weird. Lastly I'd suggest adding some padding to the right side of it to match the left padding on the logo.

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Thanksss

 

[CosmoPeak]

beatifull

 

[Owen]

Happy for you being interested in graphics but they're a bit woeful. I get that its your first time and practice means perfection. I'd suggest that you try look at examples on findretros and try replicate them in your style. Keeping to the size format though and trying out different habbo texts like Volter etc.

 

[NathanCarn3y]

Happy for you being interested in graphics but they're a bit woeful. I get that its your first time and practice means perfection. I'd suggest that you try look at examples on findretros and try replicate them in your style. Keeping to the size format though and trying out different habbo texts like Volter etc.

Thankssss for the suggestion!

 

[Rain]

Use logos that don't need resizing, and use a font like volter for the text on the bottom.
It looks terrible when it pixelates. Also use a plain BG or blur out the bg or fade it.

 

[NathanCarn3y]

Use logos that don't need resizing, and use a font like volter for the text on the bottom.
It looks terrible when it pixelates. Also use a plain BG or blur out the bg or fade it.

Thanks for the feedback

 

[reishin]

use volter as the font, maybe add an outline to make it more stand out. and keep it up!

 

[NathanCarn3y]

use volter as the font, maybe add an outline to make it more stand out. and keep it up!

Thanks