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Notorious

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Mar 2, 2012
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Got really bored, so I've conjured this piece of concept work. Constructive criticism please :)
EDIT: After receiving some feedback, I've taken that certain feedback into action, matching the font with the above.

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Mega

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Mar 23, 2013
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Too dull, not keen with the font used for the login button.


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Notorious

The Notorious D.E.E
Mar 2, 2012
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Too dull, not keen with the font used for the login button.


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I completely agree. The colour scheme is kinda' my own touch/style. Thanks.
 

Data

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May 19, 2013
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Looks nice 7/10 you could add a better & bigger logo that would suit this design more.
 

Whip

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Nov 6, 2013
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I Love This. 10/10 Man. The only thing i don't like that could be in xenon's logo not sure is that speaker. but apart from that great work and orignal :)
 

Balls

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Jun 1, 2013
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Personally, I think it looks great! You should think about reducing the size of the login button and maybe add a register button in stead of "click here".
8/10 great work!
 

Gajeel

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7/10, I find the login page too dull. Try making another button for Registration instead of a hyperlink, and put it beside the login button. I also find the text above the login page too large, maybe you can put that quotation underneath the logo or somewhere else.
 
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