Feedback Banner and Logo

[Pinkman]

Nothing big just want some feedback on these two graphics I created. (NOTE THIS IS MY FIRST TIME EVER!)

They are both transparent just that I did them on paint.net and background is like that blah blah blah...

Inspired by @Owen

 

[Leeroy]

The logo is really nice but the volter bold in the black box looks kinda skewed - I recommend using the normal volter font for the bottom text

 

[Central]

I recommend watermarking your credit tag as it shouldn't really be that bright. IF you're using photoshop you can just right click the text layer and turn down the Opacity

 

[Pinkman]

I recommend watermarking your credit tag as it shouldn't really be that bright. IF you're using photoshop you can just right click the text layer and turn down the Opacity

Paint.NET

 

[Central]

Probs same way, set the text opacity lower

 

[cain]

I like the logo it's something different, but for the white lines I think you were trying to add a sort of shining effect? Decrease the opacity a little bit. The lines also aren't equally spread but that isn't a big deal, the description needs to be fixed since it overlaps the faded border and also looks quite off.

Good job for a first try.

 

[Kylie]

You did great for your first time, better than me anyway! Try making the font smaller on top of the transparent lining of the banner and use Volter Goldfish font, maybe size 9 or less, but readable - This will make your text look neater and not weird with the outlining of the font. Great work though!

 

[Pinkman]

You did great for your first time, better than me anyway! Try making the font smaller on top of the transparent lining of the banner and use Volter Goldfish font, maybe size 9 or less, but readable - This will make your text look neater and not weird with the outlining of the font. Great work though!

Thanks Princess, the font size is 6 I believe Ill mess around it.
 

I like the logo it's something different, but for the white lines I think you were trying to add a sort of shining effect? Decrease the opacity a little bit. The lines also aren't equally spread but that isn't a big deal, the description needs to be fixed since it overlaps the faded border and also looks quite off.

Good job for a first try.

Yeah it was meant to be an effect and I deliberately didn't make it equally spread xD

 

[reishin]

font size should be 7 (i use that most of the times) and yes you did great for your 1st time

 

[Pinkman]

font size should be 7 (i use that most of the times) and yes you did great for your 1st time

 

[Joe]

Not bad for your first attempt, logo is better than the banner. Look at other banners being made and try to replicate some of the ideas they use like the opacity mentioned earlier. Just don't give up

 

[Pinkman]

Not bad for your first attempt, logo is better than the banner. Look at other banners being made and try to replicate some of the ideas they use like the opacity mentioned earlier. Just don't give up

Thanks and yeah I rushed banner a bit.

 

[HoldUp]

Look's okay. Ovbs there could be improvements..

 

[Joe]

Look's okay. Ovbs there could be improvements..

Try not to be so subtle, how could this be improved etc