Good advertisement.
From my own feedback, there is something about your introduction that's lacking.. I read it a couple of times, it honestly sounds dull and uninteresting. Maybe you can add some description that does not relate to the obvious of every other retro..(info about staff, and experience)? I think there was just alot of repetition used, that it was hard to understand what kind of point you were trying to make.
Maybe say something like, what you're proud of in your current progress, and what you'd like to accomplish in the future instead of talking about the basic information of how your roles come together.
Few miss spelt words too.
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Sounds good, and thank you.Thread cleaned, please stick on topic.
I like your thread, and I've also been on your hotel. Goodluck!