Feedback What do you like?

Feb 27, 2013
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Hey Devbest,
I'm looking for a feedback on what I personally think have been a few of the best banners that I've created. I'm looking for the pros and cons of each.
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CosmoPeak

PeakRP.com
May 15, 2016
271
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First one - I think it's really nice, perhaps a few less bullet points or move them somewhere else. I think it'd look perfect if it scrolled slower. My favourite one. (Edit: I think it'd look really nice if one piece of text appeared related to each picture)
Second one - Also quite nice, not as "Habbo-y", but the background helps a lot. Really like it as well.
Third one - Not as catchy, but it looks very nice for a non-animated banner.

Are you creating banners for other hotels or just Hobba?
 

Xylo

邪悪
Jul 21, 2015
561
143
First one:
  • Background is moving too fast.
  • Text & bullet points don't blend with the background's colour scheme.
  • Text is blurred at some parts because background doesn't bode well together.
  • Logo's font is nice.
  • Logo's colours are okay, blue/green tends to match CMS's colour schemes more than less.
Second one: (Favourite of them all)
  • The quality of the text and size is perfect, well made.
  • Background is too darkened for my taste.
  • I don't think you should have the text replacing the previous ones. Make it so that it dispenses into a list or something.
Third one:
  • Blurry and ugly background image.
  • Blurry text because you didn't recolour and border it.
  • Better logo than your first banner.
Your hotel is a pile of shit, anything "casino based" is obviously shit because it doesn't take a rocket scientist to set up a stable economy. All of your advertising angles are crap aswell. Should just close.
 

MayoMayn

BestDev
Oct 18, 2016
1,423
683
First one:
  • Background is moving too fast.
  • Text & bullet points don't blend with the background's colour scheme.
  • Text is blurred at some parts because background doesn't bode well together.
  • Logo's font is nice.
  • Logo's colours are okay, blue/green tends to match CMS's colour schemes more than less.
Second one: (Favourite of them all)
  • The quality of the text and size is perfect, well made.
  • Background is too darkened for my taste.
  • I don't think you should have the text replacing the previous ones. Make it so that it dispenses into a list or something.
Third one:
  • Blurry and ugly background image.
  • Blurry text because you didn't recolour and border it.
  • Better logo than your first banner.
Your hotel is a pile of shit, anything "casino based" is obviously shit because it doesn't take a rocket scientist to set up a stable economy. All of your advertising angles are crap aswell. Should just close.
ONT: Looks decent, could use a few improvements.

OFFT: Actually it does to setup a decent economy. Every single retro is using the same casino based economy. This means, they use custom rares and diamonds for their values currency. No retros have ever given it a thought to add custom currencies. E.g I added my own called "Activity Points", so it was required to have referred users or gotten a login streak to buy LTD rares, due to the fact that not just the richest user would be capable of having rares, if they were the first to buy them all. Logic, all retros are just the same shit when it comes to economy. Never seen a single one having habbo economy where they could've priced their ordinary furnitures to duckets, and kept HC items and rares as coin value, or Club Sofas as standard rare value.

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Xylo

邪悪
Jul 21, 2015
561
143
ONT: Looks decent, could use a few improvements.

OFFT: Actually it does to setup a decent economy. Every single retro is using the same casino based economy. This means, they use custom rares and diamonds for their values currency. No retros have ever given it a thought to add custom currencies. E.g I added my own called "Activity Points", so it was required to have referred users or gotten a login streak to buy LTD rares, due to the fact that not just the richest user would be capable of having rares, if they were the first to buy them all. Logic, all retros are just the same shit when it comes to economy. Never seen a single one having habbo economy where they could've priced their ordinary furnitures to duckets, and kept HC items and rares as coin value, or Club Sofas as standard rare value.

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Why did you only respond with half a sentence of irrelevant and non-suggestive criticism on this thread just to start an argument? So childish, I swear for a guy who looks 38 and houses an entire room dedicated to worshiping Hitler you really have an ignorant mindset.

The idea of currencies being separated has been used by Habboon back in 2012/2013 right before it closed. It was then used off and on throughout other hotels being opened and closed; e.g Habwave, Hobba, Zabbo (one of the remakes Justin did had it because I suggested it), honestly so many have done it. I've been telling people to do it for years so it's not unique by any means. It seems as though your vision and insight on matters involving communities is useless since you just state opinions when the facts say otherwise.
 

MayoMayn

BestDev
Oct 18, 2016
1,423
683
Why did you only respond with half a sentence of irrelevant and non-suggestive criticism on this thread just to start an argument? So childish, I swear for a guy who looks 38 and houses an entire room dedicated to worshiping Hitler you really have an ignorant mindset.

The idea of currencies being separated has been used by Habboon back in 2012/2013 right before it closed. It was then used off and on throughout other hotels being opened and closed; e.g Habwave, Hobba, Zabbo (one of the remakes Justin did had it because I suggested it), honestly so many have done it. I've been telling people to do it for years so it's not unique by any means. It seems as though your vision and insight on matters involving communities is useless since you just state opinions when the facts say otherwise.
I didn't start an argue, you basically just did. All I did was creating a statement, that you saw as an era to begin a new argue. If you've been telling people that for years, how come when you opened up yours, it had slagged diamond currencies as value set? Quit being a hypocrite, you're still worse than Leader. Atleast I don't look like a british fucking skid. Stfu and gtfo.
 

Xylo

邪悪
Jul 21, 2015
561
143
I didn't start an argue, you basically just did. All I did was creating a statement, that you saw as an era to begin a new argue. If you've been telling people that for years, how come when you opened up yours, it had slagged diamond currencies as value set? Quit being a hypocrite, you're still worse than Leader. Atleast I don't look like a british fucking skid. Stfu and gtfo.
Look at you begging for my attention and talking about random made up shit. Nothing new from you, slagged diamond currencies as value sets? Hell I haven't opened a hotel, advertised a hotel, or been remotely involved with helping a hotel in years; so how in the hell did I do any of that? Stop going off-topic, this thread is for constructive criticism on @BrandonM's banners and you made it into some petty drama. Grow up. Making me cringe with how upset you are at me roasting you 24/7 when I see you on a hotel, if you're that emotional unstable from someone's honesty, you should really shut off your computer and go outside more often.
 

Etrion

?
Dec 22, 2016
108
32
ONT: Looks decent, could use a few improvements.

OFFT: Actually it does to setup a decent economy. Every single retro is using the same casino based economy. This means, they use custom rares and diamonds for their values currency. No retros have ever given it a thought to add custom currencies. E.g I added my own called "Activity Points", so it was required to have referred users or gotten a login streak to buy LTD rares, due to the fact that not just the richest user would be capable of having rares, if they were the first to buy them all. Logic, all retros are just the same shit when it comes to economy. Never seen a single one having habbo economy where they could've priced their ordinary furnitures to duckets, and kept HC items and rares as coin value, or Club Sofas as standard rare value.

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OFT: Tho i do use the GOTW Points in catalog :p

ONT: They all actually do look really good, the one i like most is the 2nd one :)
 

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