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[Rate] HassanTech v2
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<blockquote data-quote="Markshall" data-source="post: 266789" data-attributes="member: 1872"><p>For a 13 year old, it's not that bad! Your English isn't that bad too.</p><p></p><p>It's much better than the first.</p><p></p><p>However, I do agree with Quackster -- use paragraphs more. There seems to be too much text, it will put people off reading.</p><p>Also, I agree with Sysode, lighten up the colour scheme.</p><p></p><p>But good work.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Markshall, post: 266789, member: 1872"] For a 13 year old, it's not that bad! Your English isn't that bad too. It's much better than the first. However, I do agree with Quackster -- use paragraphs more. There seems to be too much text, it will put people off reading. Also, I agree with Sysode, lighten up the colour scheme. But good work. [/QUOTE]
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