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[HoldUp]

So I recently created a banner for a hotel I play at. Not made them for a while so this is my first. I made the background myself, done it all myself except from drawing the text lol. Any feedback is appreciated, anything I could do better or make the banner more appealing?

 

[Kratos]

Pretty original. Remove the "http://" part

 

[HoldUp]

Pretty original. Remove the "http://" part

Is there anything I could add which would attract people because the banner stands out?

 

[Coltz]

For starter, you could add your black & white border line for around the banner limits. Also what @Kratos mentioned, try removing the "http://". Don't mean to criticize your work but you also need a fancy Logo to go with it. Try using a font that you can find from various websites, I personally use the "Pacifico" font. But yes it is a very original banner.

 

[cammy]

Is there anything I could add which would attract people because the banner stands out?

A unique text for "nuka". Maybe add an animation, something simple.

 

[HoldUp]

For starter, you could add your black & white border line for around the banner limits. Also what @Kratos mentioned, try removing the "http://". Don't mean to criticize your work but you also need a fancy Logo to go with it. Try using a font that you can find from various websites, I personally use the "Pacifico" font. But yes it is a very original banner.

Thanks for then feedback. Criticising always helps people out and now I know what I can approve on. Thanks.