Service Hotel banners, badges and other requests.

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cammy

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Taking requests for anything.

I like to think that all my graphics are unique and stand out. Always good quality and easy on the eye.

Give me decent guidelines if you want something specific.

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Xylo

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From one GFX to another, work on the cleanliness of your descriptions and lettering more. Your logo specifically is really sloppy and the overall layout of your banner is completely unorganized but everyone starts somewhere.

As for your badges, they have too many different colours going on with different aspects of the badge and looks really forced and awkward. Nice attempt though. Keep it up, I'm sure you'll get the hang of it.
 

cammy

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From one GFX to another, work on the cleanliness of your descriptions and lettering more. Your logo specifically is really sloppy and the overall layout of your banner is completely unorganized but everyone starts somewhere.

As for your badges, they have too many different colours going on with different aspects of the badge and looks really forced and awkward. Nice attempt though. Keep it up, I'm sure you'll get the hang of it.

Thanks for the feedback.
 
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CharlesN

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Mar 16, 2017
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Taking requests for anything.

I like to think that all my graphics are unique and stand out. Always good quality and easy on the eye.

Give me decent guidelines if you want something specific.

Previous work...
uD41pny.gif


pYNw0Dk.gif


zYTGHkJ.gif
UkcZsWH.gif
lEjQclW.gif
yyEHgoK.gif
rIHuLhT.gif
CAG2oDG.gif
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Can u be my GFX Artist? PM me bro <3
 

Liam

smooth and dynamic
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Not bad, they're different. Only thing I dislike is the logo choice and where the text is. Good luck with improving and keep it up.
 

cain

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From one GFX to another, work on the cleanliness of your descriptions and lettering more. Your logo specifically is really sloppy and the overall layout of your banner is completely unorganized but everyone starts somewhere.

As for your badges, they have too many different colours going on with different aspects of the badge and looks really forced and awkward. Nice attempt though. Keep it up, I'm sure you'll get the hang of it.
You aren't a GFX artist.

On-topic: I'd agree with Xylo though, I appreciate you trying to be creative and do something unique/different but if you're going to do so though really aim for having a sleek and clean looking design instead of something that doesn't contrast well.
 

Owen

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I like them. Its unique and different which we need in the retro community. The same is so boring and sometimes we need to do a little bit of mix and match. Good work pal, keep it up.
 

Meap

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I wouldn't mind if you could make me a new banner and a new staff enable for my hotel? <3
 

Xylo

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Jul 21, 2015
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You aren't a GFX artist.

On-topic: I'd agree with Xylo though, I appreciate you trying to be creative and do something unique/different but if you're going to do so though really aim for having a sleek and clean looking design instead of something that doesn't contrast well.
Throwback to when you became Verb after hitting me up about graphics and releasing a buncha dinky banners and you thought you were an animator for Pixar. :p

edit: I just noticed the OP added new badges and stuff, really ugly. The badges look sloppier than half the female community on retro's eyebrows, you should take a step back and view your badges before thinking about releasing them because quality badges beat quickly rushed and barely edited badges every time. Sorry not sorry.
 

Velaski

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Throwback to when you became Verb after hitting me up about graphics and releasing a buncha dinky banners and you thought you were an animator for Pixar. :p

edit: I just noticed the OP added new badges and stuff, really ugly. The badges look sloppier than half the female community on retro's eyebrows, you should take a step back and view your badges before thinking about releasing them because quality badges beat quickly rushed and barely edited badges every time. Sorry not sorry.
Brutal, but constructive! I would agree with this guy a bit (hes heartless <3). I'm not no GFX Artist but I can observe that you need to work on cleanliness and image choices.
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Would be much better if it was the actual speech bar. Little things do contribute to the overall output!

The badges are nice!
 

cammy

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Brutal, but constructive! I would agree with this guy a bit (hes heartless <3). I'm not no GFX Artist but I can observe that you need to work on cleanliness and image choices.
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Would be much better if it was the actual speech bar. Little things do contribute to the overall output!

The badges are nice!
I know I agree, it's not easy doing all this in paint though!
 

cain

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May 12, 2012
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Throwback to when you became Verb after hitting me up about graphics and releasing a buncha dinky banners and you thought you were an animator for Pixar. :p

edit: I just noticed the OP added new badges and stuff, really ugly. The badges look sloppier than half the female community on retro's eyebrows, you should take a step back and view your badges before thinking about releasing them because quality badges beat quickly rushed and barely edited badges every time. Sorry not sorry.
LOL I didn't hit you up for shit, that was for a name! :p

on topic: I too realised you've added new things, they're pretty good man! Might have to ask you for a little something myself if you're free haha.
 

Meap

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@Meap Sure is there a certain style you want them to be?

@Xylo Love you.
dw about the banner, just interested in an enable tbh, any chance you could try a new design to try match my hotel or are those the only 4 designs you're willing to do :p
 

Xylo

邪悪
Jul 21, 2015
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I know I agree, it's not easy doing all this in paint though!
Depending on what you're trying to do this could change, but I noticed you don't re-define the colours for your texts so they look fuzzy and blurry. To do this all you do is zoom into the individual pixels for the words and the white boxes that make up the word need to be re-established with proper white so that they are bright and not grey which makes them blurry. Then you just outline it in black, based off of what Velaski was commenting on (
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) it looks like this is an actual text box from a client so you would do the opposite and zoom into the individual pixels to re-establish the black colouring because it looks SUPER blurry.

If you have actual questions, feel free to hit me up because I may be extremely honest but I don't mind helping people who are willing to put in effort.
LOL I didn't hit you up for shit, that was for a name! :p

on topic: I too realised you've added new things, they're pretty good man! Might have to ask you for a little something myself if you're free haha.
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I would like the diamond badge to say something like Focus Mod, Focus T-mod, Focus Owner, Focus Admin, Focus Dev
 

cammy

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@Meap @Smartass
Didn't really pay attention to these for a while as the thread sort of turned into an argument and such. If you still want them give me a message.
 
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Yeah me, me neither, not that important anymore, I took my retro down to help another. So it's not focus now, it's Lure aka for playhabure.xyz
 
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