Feedback on this......

[Matthewza]

Hello,

I had to design Pill box & bottle in adobe Illustrator, I was only aloud to design it with solid colors so I designed everything with Black, White, and Gray.

Before:

After:

Thanks,
Matthew

 

[Benden]

Not sure how you could put feedback to this. It looks like a box

 

[Matthewza]

Not sure how you could put feedback to this. It looks like a box

Like the project was to make it look a lot better, Idk my teacher is f*ed up with making up projects....

 

[Benden]

Like the project was to make it look a lot better, Idk my teacher is f*ed up with making up projects....

I'd discourage using black and white then. It wont stand out to the consumers

 

[Matthewza]

I'd discourage using black and white then. It wont stand out to the consumers

I'm only aloud to use solid colors... sadly

Any color that I should use? hmm :S

 

[Jeffrey]

Red and Black or Blue and black?

 

[Matthewza]

Red and Black or Blue and black?

Dark or light?

 

[Owen]

I like it, it looks very alright for a school task

 

[Jeffrey]

Dark or light?

200% Nigga If you cant understand then : Darker Master Mathewza

 

[HowToHayden]

Some improvements that could be made (If someone was being really picky):

• Move the writing away from the edge of the box.
• Possibly move the Warning message to the top of the box.

It appears to be different languages on each side on the original so the warning could possibly go at the top of the box as you'd assume this to be the most important piece of information on the box?

Looks nice though for a school project.