Feedback Animated Banner For "Habboon"

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ByCreator

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Hey there. My name is Josh (Creator) I am a 18 year old graphic designer with a diploma in "Computer Graphic Design" I have recently seen a few people doing little .gif banners for "Habbo Retros" so I decided to give it a try myself. This is my first ever, so I would really appreciate some constructive criticism! I also hope the owners and users from Habboon see this. Thank you so much for your time!

Here it is:
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Wickd

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I don't like the font you used,it just doesn't fit at all.
 

Ultra

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The animation is good, but the graphics themselves could be better. Sometimes the border is there, sometimes it's gone, one of the pictures is blurry, the logo is from Habbox with no edits. If you improve on these aspects, it would look much better.
 

ByCreator

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I either charge money or do them for free for really big hotels so people will end up seeing my work and buying one, lol.
 

Hashh

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I either charge money or do them for free for really big hotels so people will end up seeing my work and buying one, lol.
Our one is opening today and is going to have allot of users :p
 
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I either charge money or do them for free for really big hotels so people will end up seeing my work and buying one, lol.
plus I don't think big hotels will need your help they have editors like habboons banner...
 

ByCreator

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What's the link of your Hotel? And I created Fresh's banners when they were on FindRetro, they just weren't animated. And @Ultra did Habboons banner xD But I know what you mean.
 

Hashh

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What's the link of your Hotel? And I created Fresh's banners when they were on FindRetro, they just weren't animated. And @Ultra did Habboons banner xD But I know what you mean.
LOL then again our one is opening it is Habbeon.pw and has a unique CMS and R63B it will be open today put in your country tomorrow it will be open
 

Mikey

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The whole idea is pretty good i just dislike the font and how the borders are messed up but i love the concept
 

ByCreator

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Yeah, I only just realised the borders were all fucked up when I posted it. Thanks for the feeedback man :)
 

RyanzRetros

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I know everyone has said the borders, so I will not go into that, but the logo as well. If you were doing Habboon, you would use THEIR current logo, the red scribbly one as the one you used is awful. Provided in an EpicHosts Habbo retro setup, it really should be better than that.
 

ByCreator

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I know everyone has said the borders, so I will not go into that, but the logo as well. If you were doing Habboon, you would use THEIR current logo, the red scribbly one as the one you used is awful. Provided in an EpicHosts Habbo retro setup, it really should be better than that.

The red scribbly one? what in the living fuck are you talking about?
 
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