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<blockquote data-quote="Sysode" data-source="post: 307702" data-attributes="member: 25453">I swapped the labels for the images around, you had them the wrong way <img src="/styles/default/xenforo/smilies/emojione/tongue.png"&nbsp; class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":p" title="Stick Out Tongue&nbsp; &nbsp; :p" data-shortname=":p" />Anyway, here are a few tips you could use for improving in my opinion:<ul>
<li data-xf-list-type="ul">Design your website around your logo (or vice versa) - For some reason I feel the yellow in the logo doesn't really match with anything on the site;</li>
<li data-xf-list-type="ul">Typography is a key part of design, choosing fonts that go well is always good and considering what their role is, is even better. For example, at the moment I feel your navigation font would suit better as a paragraph font and your main text over the image would suit better if it was bigger and stood out more on the page;</li>
<li data-xf-list-type="ul">Chill with the shadows on the text, it looks like you're going for a flat sort of feel, keep it that way. By all means keep the shadow just go a little lighter maybe?</li>
<li data-xf-list-type="ul">The colour of the font on the green doesn't feel right, maybe go for a white or lighter font or else the contrast starts to clash</li>
<li data-xf-list-type="ul">I don't think the footer needs to be so large, it's not an important part of the page and it doesn't need much attention at all - reduce the padding you're using and maybe center the text</li>
</ul>Sorry if this seems a lot, in reality it's not.. I've just attempted to explain why I've said each point. If there's anything you don't understand (probably because I rushed this and it doesn't make sense) just ask.&nbsp; It's a design that could be nice and modern, stick with it and take in to account what others have to say about it.--Also, moved this to &quot;showcase&quot; as that's the best place for feedback.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Sysode, post: 307702, member: 25453"] I swapped the labels for the images around, you had them the wrong way :P Anyway, here are a few tips you could use for improving in my opinion: [LIST] [*]Design your website around your logo (or vice versa) - For some reason I feel the yellow in the logo doesn't really match with anything on the site; [*]Typography is a key part of design, choosing fonts that go well is always good and considering what their role is, is even better. For example, at the moment I feel your navigation font would suit better as a paragraph font and your main text over the image would suit better if it was bigger and stood out more on the page; [*]Chill with the shadows on the text, it looks like you're going for a flat sort of feel, keep it that way. By all means keep the shadow just go a little lighter maybe? [*]The colour of the font on the green doesn't feel right, maybe go for a white or lighter font or else the contrast starts to clash [*]I don't think the footer needs to be so large, it's not an important part of the page and it doesn't need much attention at all - reduce the padding you're using and maybe center the text [/LIST] Sorry if this seems a lot, in reality it's not.. I've just attempted to explain why I've said each point. If there's anything you don't understand (probably because I rushed this and it doesn't make sense) just ask. It's a design that could be nice and modern, stick with it and take in to account what others have to say about it. -- Also, moved this to "showcase" as that's the best place for feedback. [/QUOTE]

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