Song Project

[Parse]

Hello Devbest.

I've had motivation for a music career ever since I was about 6 years old. I've learned to play multiple instruments such as the guitar, the drums and the piano. Lately I have grown into lyric writing and I would like to share a new song project I am working on. I'd love to hear feedback and suggestions to make the lyrics better, and I've struggled to come with a title and a chorus but I've written two verses. This is a rap/nu metal type of song. Its about a love that was lost and the frustration of it.

 

[BenHands]

Good to see you've pushed on your dream.

OFT: I even rapped this out loud, thank god nobody was in the room with me

Back ONT: But yeah, it's great.

 

[Zymf]

eh

 

[Parse]

eh

Translation:

Love is not a game, take it serious. If love is played as a game, it is murder as in you are destroying an emotions of another being by scandalizing fake emotion of love. I'm not sure if you didn't quite understand what that was saying, but hopefully my interpretation helped.