ICT: Coursework Assignment work
- Thread starter Owen
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To be blunt, it looks... shit.
The colours do not compliment each other - simplicity is often admired with advertising nower days. The font for OwePhone(?) I can barely read and looks extremely outdated. The shadows are a no no. Pull everything back, simplify it. The phones look squashed however that may just me being used to bigger screens. As someone who advertises and glorifies yourself as a graphic designer, this is not very good at all.
The colours do not compliment each other - simplicity is often admired with advertising nower days. The font for OwePhone(?) I can barely read and looks extremely outdated. The shadows are a no no. Pull everything back, simplify it. The phones look squashed however that may just me being used to bigger screens. As someone who advertises and glorifies yourself as a graphic designer, this is not very good at all.
Jump
You are beautiful beyond comprehension
- Feb 16, 2011
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Ignore this guy, he's so far up his own arse his eyes are covered in shit and cant tell the difference.
Lighten the background up and it'll make a nice advertisement. To get some extra points you can make it in different banner sizes. Try to rework the text, it's a bit choppy.
Owen
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- Mar 20, 2013
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I totally agree with your comment here, in our coursework we're not aloud downloaded fonts due to copyright and shit like that. The text looks easilable read though, I can see it from a mile and it looks alright. There isn't alot of fonts anyway to change it to due to copyright. I can see what your coming on with your feedback and I respect you for that, I'll post my improvements soon when I've finished it all.
Thanks for the feedback, I literately agree on lighting the background up a little bit more hense it seems a more dark advertisement. I think im liking the biograph text but Imma try improve to 'OwePhone' font.
JayC
Always Learning
- Aug 8, 2013
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Now that I am done correcting your illiteracy (Which next time you should use devbest's auto correct system), here is what I think:
>> Font doesn't match today's advertising, as already mentioned. Looks childish instead of professional.
>> Apps are not correctly aligned
>> "Your very own smartphone" sounds stupid as fuck seeming that 90% of phones today are "smartphones"
>> No Copyright? Yet this image is the fucking iPhone...
and I am pretty sure it's still copyright if you grab an image off Google, slightly edit it from the original iPhone design, and say you made it...
"Great for me since I love doing graphics, bad for people that can't do them"
Take your own advice and enjoy your C
Sysode
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- Dec 11, 2012
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Why are you avoiding font faces because of copyright? There are hundreds of free open fonts out there, most of which allow for multi-use - even the ones that aren't 100% open only restrict you to use the fonts commercially, which you are not. Don't restrict yourself to system fonts where its okay to be using a majority of the free fonts out there - just be sure to check their licensing terms.
Jump
You are beautiful beyond comprehension
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Actually you can use various of fonts for non-commericla purposes, traditionally it would be a problem but as its for an academic purpose, it's not. If your teacher says anything say you used all resources you had to your disposal, he/she wont beable to argue that.
