That looks pretty good but its not the sort of design that I like.
Maybe get some nice bright colors that kind of match into a design? Not super bright colors but colors that are soft on the eyes.
I wouldn't recommend asking someone this..
It won't exactly be your hotel if someone else buys the VPS.
If I was to buy the VPS I'd rather be Founder and you be Owner. (I'm not buying)
What you should do is become friends with lots of technology people over a couple of months then offer...
Yo,
I'm Matthew,
My hobbies are skateboarding, graffiti, partying, graphic/web designing, bmx and other stuff..
My favorite genre of music would probably be Hip-hop/Rap.
and uhh yeah...
Hope to get to know everyone here! :)