Thoughts on my first banner?

[Cronus]

Hey Devbest,

Thoughts on this banner I made with paint.net?

 

[JayCook]

sick for just startin.

 

[Cronus]

Thanks,

Jay!

 

[Menkz]

could use alot more stuff.. Make the volter font 7px with a border around it...

 

[Mega]

Its nice, i should recommend you. If you using volter, don't use more then 7 sometimes 9pt. And don't use sharp as what ever its called.

 

[lepos]

Logo is too close to the top, the 5 online isn't centered in the box making it look weird. It's a bit empty around the logo especially because there's not much going on in the background image. Nevertheless, good try for your first banner.

 

[Magic]

Not the best, Good first attempt

 

[j2o]

I think its crap, but then I look at my first ones and I think their crap so yolo, u will get better.

 

[Brackson]

Find a new background (maybe something brighter), vertically center the logo, fix the font, use proper grammar, make the 'online now' box match the bottom box in transparency and possibly round off its corners.

Right now it's 3/10 in my opinion.

 

[Cronus]

Remember its my friend time aha

 

[westonallen0990]

Find a new background (maybe something brighter), vertically center the logo, fix the font, use proper grammar, make the 'online now' box match the bottom box in transparency and possibly round off its corners.

Right now it's 3/10 in my opinion.

No one uses proper grammar on retros

 

[Nehalem]

Add more margin to the logo, and more padding to the info line.