Random design thing

[Espinosa]

Yow, waddup guys. So on another forum is posted a graphic, but no one answered and yeah I feel like no one did like it. Sooo.. I going to post it here at this smexy website, and I hope there will be people who gonna give a rate.

So here it is;

it was for a project on that forum, but if no one likes it, I guess I going to make it here at this forum so. rate it and give me some feedback, bye x0

 

[Sysode]

Why do you keep referring to this 'other website'?

Anyway, nice choice of colours although I think you've over-done it a bit. The idea of this is good, just a few minor changes like the main body font could be decreased and the line-height increased, to help with readability and shit. I'd also use a smaller border (green) but that's just me.

 

[Balls]

It looks alright I guess, but the main text is very difficult to read; try adjusting the line height. Also try make it abit more simpler, get rid of all the bottom section and leaving the copyright. It would look ore simpler and elegant but, it looks ok.

 

[Espinosa]

Thank you guys. And thank you so much for all that feedback

 

[Magic]

As they said ^

Also make the copyright line section a little bit smaller.

 

[Markshall]

I don like your choice of fonts. Colours are good, but the text is too squished together and line height needs to be increased.

 

[Espinosa]

Thanks for the feedback guys.

 

[Latinus]

I like the theme actually, not bad, try adding a footer with Contact details etc..
Good luck with your future work