Feedback How do these designs look?

[Data]

I was bored so I decided to create a index(this is the first index I've made), it's not perfect but I think it looks alright for a first attempt.

I know the logo is horrible, but I don't have photoshop atm to create a new one. So how can I improve it?

I started another design for a template how does it look?

How can I improve the site template?

 

[Mega]

Is this coded? If it is not make the login box parallel with the 2 other box and maybe changed the login box to light gray. For the 2 box maybe add a white border inside and black border outside. Overall like the idea but not keen with the arrangement. 7/10 since this is your first attempt in MS paint if im right, ik Ms Paint is hard to align stuff up.


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[Data]

Is this coded? If it is not make the login box parallel with the 2 other box and maybe changed the login box to light gray. For the 2 box maybe add a white border inside and black border outside. Overall like the idea but not keen with the arrangement. 7/10 since this is your first attempt in MS paint if im right, ik Ms Paint is hard to align stuff up.


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It's coded I didn't design it then code it just designed it straight away, I will change the center box colors as I don't like the purple as much as it was it's been blue, gray& purple but i'll try a lighter gray.

 

[Data]

Changed it a little bit;

 

[Awnyx]

I like it.

 

[Data]

Started to work on a site design how does it look?

 

[Ultra]

Use the font ubuntu.

 

[Nehalem]

As a first attempt, it's very good. But as I've seen many times when people (often 'beginners') are making these kind of templates, are that they can't really handle the padding and margin attributes.

If I were you, I would fix (you will have to compare the width's and height's of the divs) the padding and margin 'issues' to make it look more professional. And don't use so much gray colors, it make it looks boring and 'empty'. 6/10, good work.

 

[Data]

Added a news box to the template

 

[Shatter]

Added a news box to the template

I personally think that I can see alot of potential in this design but I would prefer seeing a bit more habbo themed, maybe something related to the new Habbo.com UI?
What if you use images in the navigation rather than text. I think that would fit your overall design alot better.

If you want you can PM me or something and I can throw you some more suggestions and maybe do some designs for you via Photoshop.
Lemme know.

 

[Data]

Added a Enter button;

I thought I would post how the navigation select looks as-well;

Tell me how I can improve the navigation select.

Also made a few alert boxes - I will remove them just making them so I don't have to make them when I use the design.

I also started another design for the navigation, some people said they don't like the navigation so how does this look?

Added Hotcampaigns and a radio;

Also was thinking about staff page;

 

[Data]

Done a few updates;

 

[Sysode]

One word: Padding - focus on adding some more to pad the content out a little. Nevermind, seen the latest printscreen and it appears you have.

Anyways, I'd re-consider your color-scheme, many colors, much luminosity, wow.

Seriously though, try and stick to using more "flat" colours, this basically means colors that aren't so bright and are ones that won't hurt some old mans eyes (even though this is habbo, you never know who's browsing so make them happy)

With a few minor edits, this could look reasonably nice. Keep at it man.

 

[Data]

Thanks for the feedback going to make some changes later when I have got IIS working on my pc.

 

[Mega]

Maybe, add a borderline to whole of the nav? It seems like only below and top have border.