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<blockquote data-quote="Sysode" data-source="post: 286110" data-attributes="member: 25453">I can't figure out if this is actual decent or not - no offense. It's like you've seen a site you have liked and you have attempted to mimic it or just follow a similar structure. The idea behind it I think it quite nice, it's got a modern 'flow' about it but the way in which you've created this looks odd. <ul>
<li data-xf-list-type="ul">The navigation isn't my style (personally I think there is too much padding-top but I guess it doesn't look to bad actually)</li>
<li data-xf-list-type="ul">The carousel feels to big and in your face, your site looks minimal so try and make this minimal as well - you could achieve this by reducing the size of the arrows and boxes to navigate through the image. Also by reducing the text and maybe aligning it and added some darker text shadow so it stands out</li>
<li data-xf-list-type="ul">The paragraph text seems to be just placed there, almost as if you got lazy. Try center aligning it and make the sub-title slightly darker to help improve the contrast - either this or add two columns to fill out the space more. </li>
<li data-xf-list-type="ul">&quot;trusted by&quot; it looks like the sub-title but it's used in a different way, this just looks odd. Change the styling/formatting of it someway to it flows better. </li>
</ul>Anyway, for a first design it's pretty good. Maybe considering what others put in the thread will help you improve. Keep on updating and showing us what it's like <img src="/styles/default/xenforo/smilies/emojione/smile.png"&nbsp; class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":)" title="Smile&nbsp; &nbsp; :)" data-shortname=":)" /></blockquote>

[QUOTE="Sysode, post: 286110, member: 25453"] I can't figure out if this is actual decent or not - no offense. It's like you've seen a site you have liked and you have attempted to mimic it or just follow a similar structure. The idea behind it I think it quite nice, it's got a modern 'flow' about it but the way in which you've created this looks odd. [LIST] [*]The navigation isn't my style (personally I think there is too much padding-top but I guess it doesn't look to bad actually) [*]The carousel feels to big and in your face, your site looks minimal so try and make this minimal as well - you could achieve this by reducing the size of the arrows and boxes to navigate through the image. Also by reducing the text and maybe aligning it and added some darker text shadow so it stands out [*]The paragraph text seems to be just placed there, almost as if you got lazy. Try center aligning it and make the sub-title slightly darker to help improve the contrast - either this or add two columns to fill out the space more. [*]"trusted by" it looks like the sub-title but it's used in a different way, this just looks odd. Change the styling/formatting of it someway to it flows better. [/LIST] Anyway, for a first design it's pretty good. Maybe considering what others put in the thread will help you improve. Keep on updating and showing us what it's like :) [/QUOTE]

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